When first reading, “A Tongue – to tell Him I am true!” I felt disoriented by Emily Dickinson’s roundabout, meandering syntax. So, I decided to take on a sense of having been thrust into a mission that seems impossible to understand. I found a story line acted out between the poem’s speaker and a still-unproven emissary. Play along with me, if you like, to create a complete sentence out of the poem’s first line by using the recognizable lead-in.
Whimsically, at first, I placed the familiar cliche from the movie, “Mission Impossible,” in front of the poem. This is your mission. If you decide to accept it, you will need:
A Tongue – to tell Him I am true!
It’s fee – to be of Gold -
Had Nature – in Her monstrous House
A single Ragged Child -
To earn a Mine – would run
That Interdicted Way,
And tell Him – Charge thee speak it plain -
That so far – Truth is True?
And answer What I do -
Beginning with the Day
That Night – begun -
Nay – Midnight – ’twas -
Since Midnight – happened – say -
If once more – Pardon – Boy -
The Magnitude thou may
Enlarge my Message – If too vast
Another Lad – help thee -
Thy Pay – in Diamonds – be -
And His – in solid Gold -
Say Rubies – if He hesitate -
My Message – must be told -
Say – last I said – was This -
That when the Hills – come down -
And hold no higher than the Plain -
My Bond – have just begun -
And when the Heavens – disband -
And Deity conclude -
Then – look for me – Be sure you say -
Least Figure – on the Road -
The first line of the poem, now, has a subject (you), a main verb (will need), and a prepositional phrase …well, I’m not going to turn this into a grammar lesson, though I confess I always loved conjugating sentences. Right away, I feel lured into accepting this mysterious appointment with the promise of more than a fair wage: “It’s fee – to be of Gold -”. In this conjured mission, the only assurance of reliability, “… I am true!” is set opposite the vulnerable condition of precarious reliance on nature’s “monstrous House”, and, “A single Ragged Child -”.
If the “Him” referenced throughout the poem is an allusion to posterity, and “a Mine” is the rich source, or treasure house, of truth stored up in the poems for future generations, it stands to reason that, “To earn a Mine – (anyone worthy of it, willingly) would run/That Interdicted Way,”. I think part of the difficulty in this poem is that there slips back and forth self-talk by the speaker, and, imaginary instructions transmitted to another. The first two lines of the second stanza appear as a personal reflection, while the other two are addressed to one who is charged with following through. If a poem is a storehouse for truth, regardless of how much “That Interdicted Way,” that opaque language, seems to resist meaning, then the hero of this mission impossible will be the reader intent on breaching poetic perimeters. I find it comical then to read, “.. Charge Thee speak it plain – ”, speak it plain (!?), that which is embodied in the poetry itself.
Just like the movie, this “mission impossible” is not impossible at all if the poet’s representative is up to the challenge. Much of the implied dare is in the question about whether, “.. – Truth is True?”
As in the famous thriller, instinct and skill must guide when truth is not forthcoming.
The speaker seems to say that if you cannot find the truth, then look at the source of the message, “And answer What I do -”. Almost as if we are told to, “consider the source.”
Perhaps this third stanza’s apparent reversal of night and day refers to enlightened self-interest which results from a period of emotional darkness, “Since Midnight – happened – ”. If so, it would fit in with this idea of poetry-for-the-ages being dependent on a single “ragged child” and “Another Lad – (to) help thee -”.
The fifth stanza reiterates “orders” in language fitting promises to a soldier of fortune for hire, “Thy Pay – in Diamonds – be – /And His – in solid Gold – /Say Rubies – if He hesitate – ”. The speaker then seems to be whispering only to herself, “My Message – must be told – ”.
The final two stanzas are a decorative conclusion as we might see in a Hollywood film. The brave speaker walks out of the picture into the sunset. The dominant, starring role is now forever placed into the hands of the reader (ragged child? other lad?), “Say – last I said – was This – /That when the Hills – come down… And Deity conclude – / Then – look for me… Least Figure – on the Road – ”.
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